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Re: new
Hello there! I'm Angel and I just adore your name. I hope you enjoy it here and I hope you stay apart of the YWS family for a long time. ...
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Re: Who are your influences?
I really had to think about this one (in no particular order) * F. Scott Fitzgerald * Jane Austen * Shakespeare * Sarah Dessen * Charlotte Bronte
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Re: The Dark
Hey Jare-bear! I apologize for getting to this late, cuz now everyone has gotten to the nit-picks! But don't worry, I have a few things of my own that I ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Little Miss Yellow Eyes
The beginning of it was alright. Wasn't a hook, but it wasn't bad either. The talk about his parents was interesting, but got slightly drab because I don't know him ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Little Miss Yellow Eyes
Little Miss Yellow Eyes By Angel of Death Chapter 1 His shift was almost over. All through the evening, Alden had to endure crying babies, old ladies with bad eyesight ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: I started playing around on Gimp this morning. .
That would be awesome to have a bedspread that looks like this. I am a sucker for colors so I give this a thumbs up. I would wear earrings with ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Miss Adrianna Barker- 2
What a very sad ending! I did like Owen until his true colors broke free, but you did a great job taking the masks off of your characters and she ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Miss Adrianna Barker- 1
My, my dear, this was excellently executed. I love Regency novels and such, so I am able to spot easily if anything doesn't seem right, language wise, and this was ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: The Night Club (Curious Fangs)
Name: Nick Levine Age: 23 Gender: Male Species: Human Good or bad: Good Personality: He's smart, determined, and he is a very good listener Appearances: History: Nick ran away from ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Скай към небе, живота и смъртта (Sk
Скай към небе, живота и смъртта By Angel of Death {017 Crumble: Picture 25} Run bare-foot and wondrous through my soul Pray, my children, pray to the sound of my ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: The City That Never Sleeps Alone
Thanks for the critique aloe! This poem was written for a contest and the reason why kiss is bolded is because in this contest you have to use certain words ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Clouds.01
Jiggy, you have rendered me speechless...which happens every once in a while. My, this was a great poem and I am anticipating the next one. I've never read poetry from ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: The City That Never Sleeps Alone
The City That Never Sleeps Alone By Angel of Death {022. Kiss} I look good, you know. My eyes are still bright, even if I still need streetlights Sometimes, when ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: And The Skies Are Not Cloudy All Day (3)
Hey Ky, sorry if it took me a while to get with this. Mirroring what Jiggy said, this was indeed, a damn good chapter. And it was my favorite so ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Love, Death, Coming of Age
Hello, I'm Angel of Death but you can call me Angel! Welcome to YWS!!! Okay, this was a good start. Its not original, I can tell you that, but you ...
Dec 20, 2008
